looser project

     I think I did a great job on my writing piece.  My pictures were well done with pretty colors and looks like a hard work.  Or a weak coloring.  What I did to make my work in this level was, first I went on the computer and wrote two befores and two afters.  After, I drawed the book on the front.  Later I draw two before drawings and two after drawings, printed out then colored everything in and to rap it up I glued the paper (writing piece) and added the last touches.
     I think I could have done a better job.  On the pictures I didn't show how Zinkoff was feeling.  I think my work was well done however my effort was not that well constructed.   I should not have left it for the last moment.  When it was peer review a thought a was all ready when my partner said I forgot to put Zinkoffs external and internal conflict a had to go home and work on more.
     I think I needed to work on working on the first day.  Because I left it for the last minute.  The book was fun,  I should maby have writen more.  I liked working on this project and I hope we will have more.  It was very exiting book.  Overall I think it was a exiting book plus work.
   

Why does it take more force to push a car then it takes to push a bycicle

It takes more force to push a car because a car has more mass.  Also it has a motor huge wheels much more.  A bicycle is lighter and I put a bicycle inside the car so the car is heavier.  Also I have already taken a bike up a hill NEVER A CAR!  So in the end a car is heavier and a bike is lighter.  Well if the car is turned on it could be a bit easier.

Reading response 5

     In the beginning Donald Zinkoff  is exited for school but sometimes messes up the class.  Also tries to find a friend/someone to play.  In the end Donald graduates and becomes a much intelligent boy.  Also he gets chosen to play on a football team they play great.  Adding up he becomes a mature boy and has a partey many people go.  Overall he is a awesome boy.

Reading response 4

   I think that Zinkoffs biggest external conflict is people laughing at him.  Example : when he spilled water on the teachers desk also when people started laughing at his hat.  I think he should stand up loud firm voice and say I don't like that!  Another way is do things that they don't like.  Last of all he could tell a teacher or stop messing the room.

Reading response 3

     Zinkoffs internal conflict is if he should stay with his little sister or go to school.  I think he should go to school however someone of your family would be better to take care of then go to school.  I think his mother could handle it to.  Or his dad could help.  Its up for Zinkoffs decision, what will he do?