Bud not Buddy end of the book.

     Now that I have finished the book Bud not Buddy.  First I will talk about Internal and external conflicts in the book.   An external conflict is in the beginning when Bud was having a hard time through the Great Depression.  Another was when Buds mother died and he was left lonely with no family. Another was when Bud had to go to six foster homes and there he encounter someone super mean that was Todd that poked a pencil up Buds nose, and lots of horrible stuff like going on a dark place with many creatures that could kill him.  Also when he went to Grand Rapids were there was a men that tried killing Bud.  

     Now I will talk about internal conflicts.  In the first place there was not so many Internal conflicts.  One was when he needed to decide if he should run away of the foster homes.  Another was if he should go to The train station and Hooverville.  I thought the authors writing style was very interesting like when he wrote thy and words that I would rarely hear.  I think he is a great author and I recommend this book to people that have fun reading.  I am going to read many more book by this author.  Thats all I need to say of this book you should read it. Now!

Expository essay reflection.

   It is good to make sure you put on a expository essay is true facts.  Don't put many run-on-sentences.  Some of my strengths in expository writing is use many new transition words ideas are good and many other stuff.  Some of my weakness is sentence fragment and run on sentences. Some of the improvements I will make is work on shorter sentences and work on fragments without predict.

Lucas Nigro, November 12, 2013  

 Soccer

    There are so many good places to watch soccer games with a huge audience screaming for their team to win.  The crowd would like to watch games with the best players in the world, especially soccer players, soccer teams, and goalkeeper

There are many talented soccer players around the world.  One of them is Messi, a super talented soccer player that has many fans all around the world.  He is the best soccer player in the world unstoppable leader of soccer. He has a great technique that no player ever had in the world.  He also has a great speed. Adding on he has a dribbling skill, he won 4 golden balls in a row and he still can get more. He plays in Barcelona. Cristiano Ronaldo is also a very talented player the second best player in the world.  He also has a great skill but he doesn't pass Messi.  However Cristiano thinks he is the best one in the world. Cristiano plays in Real Madrid. Ribey is the last but not least player I am going to talk about.  Ribery is very good player.  He plays in the left side and is always there to make a great pass.  He plays in Bayern Munchen.

There are so many good soccer teams but there are many good ones.  Barcelona is a great team with the best player in the world.  Also they have won so many championships.  Barcelona has a technique that no other team beats them, it is the pass.  Barcelona has  around 76 possession of the ball  all other (possession means how many pass.)teams are around 60,50,and some 70.  However Barcelona lost their Coach but they earned a new one that is still very good.  Real Madrid is also a great team that many people like because there is Ronaldo in that team. Many people also think that Real Madrid is the best team in the world.  Real madrid is not friends with Barcelona, they are big enemies.  Adding both of this teams mainly go to the final.  Now this is the last team we will talk about.  Bayern Munchen is a great team. This team has mainly people from germany.  It is also a very popular team and this team is so good it is almost beating Real Madrid or maybe already beaten.  They also have a great passion with the ball, 69.  Some times I think who is the best team Barcelona, Real Madrid or Bayern Munchen.  It will take some years to figure that out, because teams get stronger every day.

There are so many good goalkeepers but I would like to introduce three.  Casillas is a great goalkeeper in Real Madrid.  He saved some spectacular balls against Varieties of teams .  Not so many balls pass because he saves all of them.  In one year lets say 120 goals enters the goal.  That is pretty amazing.  Valdes is super good goalkeeper too, however he takes many fails in the goal.  One of them is goal under legs, another is touches him then enters, also when the goalkeeper gets hurt by hitting the post.  He is the Barcelona goalkeeper.  Newer is also a super good goalkeeper one advantage is his size.  He is huge,  However being tall is not so good because it is a bit harder to get the low balls.  He is so big that affects the way you catch the ball and you jump to it. Also in a  game he saved a penalty that was so strong, Like people say, ‘’Newer the saver of the day’’!

Given these points, as one can see how many good players there are and some of the most popular ones.  there are so many impressive soccer players that everyone wants to see them front to front.  There are so many good teams however there are some that are champs.Overall there are so many good goalkeepers that jump for the ball not scared to jump, and save all balls.  Finally there are many good things to do in a arena, soccer game, isn't so impressive, WOW, Be the winner!

3-Bud no Buddy 6-10

     Bud says that ideas come from a seed.  He is right ideas are small then they grow to be more concentrated on the topic, or it also develops.  Herman. E. Callway may be Buds dad because his flyer helps him get more information and also some information is written on the flyer.  It is a metaphor because he used the word seed.  It would not be a metaphor if you used small.  like ideas come from a seed or ideas go growing and it starts from a very small piece of information and develops every time someone speaks with a good idea.

2- Bud not Buddy 6-10

     There was racism because when we were reading I saw that there were white women and many black people.  There were many more blacks.  It was very hard to find white people. White people usually in that time had more education. Also when we watched a video about some people in the Great Depression and There was a white person speaking and she said she was in it.

1-Bud not Buddy 6-10

     I think Bud is enjoying his life better in  Hooverville then in the foster home.  However finding a police man that stops them from entering the train isn't so pleasant.  Adding on  he has finally eaten something and he is around a crowd of men,women, kids, especially men.  Now Bud has more friends and a girl that will  keep him company, because of the (kiss) and because Deza likes him.  I think bud will trust the people in Hooverville because Deza likes him so I don't think Bud wont trust them.  However I don't think people that live in the street wont be so reliable.  adding on the (women) that got Buds suitcase I think would be trusted with care and honesty because she said ''I wont touch''.