Tiete project reflection

     I think the Tiete project can be a reality.  However it may take more then 10 years.   Also we take something's out. It will take about 100 years or more but if every one collaborates maybe not.
Some changes that I would have done in the Tiete project would be. I would make it a bit bigger so you can do bigger and show inside and no printing images. Only if necessary.  Also more time because EXAMPLE skate ramp.
Working in a collaborate was helpful because we got lots of work done earlier. Also we got good ideas. When some one worked the other cut.  It was very helpful.


 

River walk

I want it to start in parque do povo and end in shopping villa lobos. There is a university right next.  Shopping eldorado.  Also I want to combine both because there will be shopping malls around and pretty places.

Charlotte Doyle project feedback

     The best part working on the Charlotte Doyle project was doing the game board and the questions.  The most difficult thing to do with the partners was give the same amount of work.  A challenge we had was to color the game board the color was ending. We solved it by using another
color. I would not leave the work for the last minute I would do it the earlier because then you will be very late on your work.  I felt like this project was very fun, sometimes there was some misunderstanding or hard I think if we did not leave for the last minute we would have gotten a higher grade.

A photograph of your choice

     I chose this photo that represents an elevator that we were going up to the higher area of the Rio Tiete.  Bombs under the water made our boat rise.  Also more water helps.  I thought I was still in the same spot, the boat was not going higher.  When actually it was almost in the top.  It was amazing how fast it went.  With about 200 people and a huge boat.

A photograph that relates to the history of the Tietê river

     Essa pessoa que da para ver na foto e Domingo De Jorge Velho, o homen que mato o zumbi dos palmares, um nego super forte.  Ele è um bandeirante muito famoso.  Ele conquisto lugares fantasticos.  Ele era um dos mais poderoso, com mais technologia.  Ele tinha espada, shotgun e facas.  Ele naceu em Santana de Parnaiba.

environmental state of the Tietê river.

     O meio ambiente do rio e bem sujo com garafa e vidro que não è bom para o rio.  Mais o rio Tiete não è todo sujo.  São Paulo, Porto Feliz and Santana de Parnaiba.  Esses são os mais sujos.  A parte mais limpa de todos è Sareosopolis, o começo do rio e Barra Bonita.  Na foto da para ver espuma na agua, è toxico.  Mais quando bate na pedra e sai da agua nos dois mili segundo oxygenio entra e fiqua um poquinh mais limpo.

1. Would you have taken the journey across the Atlantic in 1832 without your family?

I would not go because I do not even now if the peple from the ship are good people.  Also I can get lost and never get home.  I would go becuse my family was not coming back and I was alone.

looser project

     I think I did a great job on my writing piece.  My pictures were well done with pretty colors and looks like a hard work.  Or a weak coloring.  What I did to make my work in this level was, first I went on the computer and wrote two befores and two afters.  After, I drawed the book on the front.  Later I draw two before drawings and two after drawings, printed out then colored everything in and to rap it up I glued the paper (writing piece) and added the last touches.
     I think I could have done a better job.  On the pictures I didn't show how Zinkoff was feeling.  I think my work was well done however my effort was not that well constructed.   I should not have left it for the last moment.  When it was peer review a thought a was all ready when my partner said I forgot to put Zinkoffs external and internal conflict a had to go home and work on more.
     I think I needed to work on working on the first day.  Because I left it for the last minute.  The book was fun,  I should maby have writen more.  I liked working on this project and I hope we will have more.  It was very exiting book.  Overall I think it was a exiting book plus work.
   

Reading response 5

     In the beginning Donald Zinkoff  is exited for school but sometimes messes up the class.  Also tries to find a friend/someone to play.  In the end Donald graduates and becomes a much intelligent boy.  Also he gets chosen to play on a football team they play great.  Adding up he becomes a mature boy and has a partey many people go.  Overall he is a awesome boy.

Reading response 4

   I think that Zinkoffs biggest external conflict is people laughing at him.  Example : when he spilled water on the teachers desk also when people started laughing at his hat.  I think he should stand up loud firm voice and say I don't like that!  Another way is do things that they don't like.  Last of all he could tell a teacher or stop messing the room.

Reading response 3

     Zinkoffs internal conflict is if he should stay with his little sister or go to school.  I think he should go to school however someone of your family would be better to take care of then go to school.  I think his mother could handle it to.  Or his dad could help.  Its up for Zinkoffs decision, what will he do?

Reading Question 2

I think I would have done something different when a tall boy came and got his hat.  He just looked at the boy.  He did not argue over it.  Also when the kids started to laugh at him he did not do anything about it.  I thought he could act a bit more aggressive when someone does that.  Not stand there like if the other person was a god that everything the other says comes out like a prayer book.

Reading question 1

Zinkoff does not care what other people say about him.  Everyone laughs at him but he does not care.  He is a very kind person from the inside from the outside he is a disaster.  Example: doing huge mess .  He has a big heart likes everyone but other people think he is awful.  Zinkoff thinks he is distracted easily,  also laughs in the wrong time.

Simulation

     Cooperation helped getting corn strips so our City (Palenque) can succeed.  Also by working hard and getting valuables for our sacrifice day, also getting worthy cards that some times may be good and bad.  By giving suggestions on math, and helping our mathematicians with the work and on getting valuable we go help our teammates too.  We have got a blue paper on our bulletin board that may be useful.

Bud not Buddy end of the book.

     Now that I have finished the book Bud not Buddy.  First I will talk about Internal and external conflicts in the book.   An external conflict is in the beginning when Bud was having a hard time through the Great Depression.  Another was when Buds mother died and he was left lonely with no family. Another was when Bud had to go to six foster homes and there he encounter someone super mean that was Todd that poked a pencil up Buds nose, and lots of horrible stuff like going on a dark place with many creatures that could kill him.  Also when he went to Grand Rapids were there was a men that tried killing Bud.  

     Now I will talk about internal conflicts.  In the first place there was not so many Internal conflicts.  One was when he needed to decide if he should run away of the foster homes.  Another was if he should go to The train station and Hooverville.  I thought the authors writing style was very interesting like when he wrote thy and words that I would rarely hear.  I think he is a great author and I recommend this book to people that have fun reading.  I am going to read many more book by this author.  Thats all I need to say of this book you should read it. Now!

Expository essay reflection.

   It is good to make sure you put on a expository essay is true facts.  Don't put many run-on-sentences.  Some of my strengths in expository writing is use many new transition words ideas are good and many other stuff.  Some of my weakness is sentence fragment and run on sentences. Some of the improvements I will make is work on shorter sentences and work on fragments without predict.

Lucas Nigro, November 12, 2013  

 Soccer

    There are so many good places to watch soccer games with a huge audience screaming for their team to win.  The crowd would like to watch games with the best players in the world, especially soccer players, soccer teams, and goalkeeper

There are many talented soccer players around the world.  One of them is Messi, a super talented soccer player that has many fans all around the world.  He is the best soccer player in the world unstoppable leader of soccer. He has a great technique that no player ever had in the world.  He also has a great speed. Adding on he has a dribbling skill, he won 4 golden balls in a row and he still can get more. He plays in Barcelona. Cristiano Ronaldo is also a very talented player the second best player in the world.  He also has a great skill but he doesn't pass Messi.  However Cristiano thinks he is the best one in the world. Cristiano plays in Real Madrid. Ribey is the last but not least player I am going to talk about.  Ribery is very good player.  He plays in the left side and is always there to make a great pass.  He plays in Bayern Munchen.

There are so many good soccer teams but there are many good ones.  Barcelona is a great team with the best player in the world.  Also they have won so many championships.  Barcelona has a technique that no other team beats them, it is the pass.  Barcelona has  around 76 possession of the ball  all other (possession means how many pass.)teams are around 60,50,and some 70.  However Barcelona lost their Coach but they earned a new one that is still very good.  Real Madrid is also a great team that many people like because there is Ronaldo in that team. Many people also think that Real Madrid is the best team in the world.  Real madrid is not friends with Barcelona, they are big enemies.  Adding both of this teams mainly go to the final.  Now this is the last team we will talk about.  Bayern Munchen is a great team. This team has mainly people from germany.  It is also a very popular team and this team is so good it is almost beating Real Madrid or maybe already beaten.  They also have a great passion with the ball, 69.  Some times I think who is the best team Barcelona, Real Madrid or Bayern Munchen.  It will take some years to figure that out, because teams get stronger every day.

There are so many good goalkeepers but I would like to introduce three.  Casillas is a great goalkeeper in Real Madrid.  He saved some spectacular balls against Varieties of teams .  Not so many balls pass because he saves all of them.  In one year lets say 120 goals enters the goal.  That is pretty amazing.  Valdes is super good goalkeeper too, however he takes many fails in the goal.  One of them is goal under legs, another is touches him then enters, also when the goalkeeper gets hurt by hitting the post.  He is the Barcelona goalkeeper.  Newer is also a super good goalkeeper one advantage is his size.  He is huge,  However being tall is not so good because it is a bit harder to get the low balls.  He is so big that affects the way you catch the ball and you jump to it. Also in a  game he saved a penalty that was so strong, Like people say, ‘’Newer the saver of the day’’!

Given these points, as one can see how many good players there are and some of the most popular ones.  there are so many impressive soccer players that everyone wants to see them front to front.  There are so many good teams however there are some that are champs.Overall there are so many good goalkeepers that jump for the ball not scared to jump, and save all balls.  Finally there are many good things to do in a arena, soccer game, isn't so impressive, WOW, Be the winner!

3-Bud no Buddy 6-10

     Bud says that ideas come from a seed.  He is right ideas are small then they grow to be more concentrated on the topic, or it also develops.  Herman. E. Callway may be Buds dad because his flyer helps him get more information and also some information is written on the flyer.  It is a metaphor because he used the word seed.  It would not be a metaphor if you used small.  like ideas come from a seed or ideas go growing and it starts from a very small piece of information and develops every time someone speaks with a good idea.

2- Bud not Buddy 6-10

     There was racism because when we were reading I saw that there were white women and many black people.  There were many more blacks.  It was very hard to find white people. White people usually in that time had more education. Also when we watched a video about some people in the Great Depression and There was a white person speaking and she said she was in it.

1-Bud not Buddy 6-10

     I think Bud is enjoying his life better in  Hooverville then in the foster home.  However finding a police man that stops them from entering the train isn't so pleasant.  Adding on  he has finally eaten something and he is around a crowd of men,women, kids, especially men.  Now Bud has more friends and a girl that will  keep him company, because of the (kiss) and because Deza likes him.  I think bud will trust the people in Hooverville because Deza likes him so I don't think Bud wont trust them.  However I don't think people that live in the street wont be so reliable.  adding on the (women) that got Buds suitcase I think would be trusted with care and honesty because she said ''I wont touch''.

Bud not Buddy 5.

     I started my life in a foster home in a serious time, The Great Depression.  Were many people lost there jobs and cant find any, cant find food, cant afford buying clothing etc.  It is all negative stuff.  Bud has a totally bad life no clothes (very little) doesn't know who is his dad Todd is bullying him Ms. Amos is treating Bud like if he wasn't there and Todd like a cute bot kind, respectful and much more.  Bud has gone in a shed were cockroaches enter his ear there were wolf head and many more disasters and in a dark place. Uh! At least I'm not were Bud was!