looser project

     I think I did a great job on my writing piece.  My pictures were well done with pretty colors and looks like a hard work.  Or a weak coloring.  What I did to make my work in this level was, first I went on the computer and wrote two befores and two afters.  After, I drawed the book on the front.  Later I draw two before drawings and two after drawings, printed out then colored everything in and to rap it up I glued the paper (writing piece) and added the last touches.
     I think I could have done a better job.  On the pictures I didn't show how Zinkoff was feeling.  I think my work was well done however my effort was not that well constructed.   I should not have left it for the last moment.  When it was peer review a thought a was all ready when my partner said I forgot to put Zinkoffs external and internal conflict a had to go home and work on more.
     I think I needed to work on working on the first day.  Because I left it for the last minute.  The book was fun,  I should maby have writen more.  I liked working on this project and I hope we will have more.  It was very exiting book.  Overall I think it was a exiting book plus work.
   

Why does it take more force to push a car then it takes to push a bycicle

It takes more force to push a car because a car has more mass.  Also it has a motor huge wheels much more.  A bicycle is lighter and I put a bicycle inside the car so the car is heavier.  Also I have already taken a bike up a hill NEVER A CAR!  So in the end a car is heavier and a bike is lighter.  Well if the car is turned on it could be a bit easier.

Reading response 5

     In the beginning Donald Zinkoff  is exited for school but sometimes messes up the class.  Also tries to find a friend/someone to play.  In the end Donald graduates and becomes a much intelligent boy.  Also he gets chosen to play on a football team they play great.  Adding up he becomes a mature boy and has a partey many people go.  Overall he is a awesome boy.

Reading response 4

   I think that Zinkoffs biggest external conflict is people laughing at him.  Example : when he spilled water on the teachers desk also when people started laughing at his hat.  I think he should stand up loud firm voice and say I don't like that!  Another way is do things that they don't like.  Last of all he could tell a teacher or stop messing the room.

Reading response 3

     Zinkoffs internal conflict is if he should stay with his little sister or go to school.  I think he should go to school however someone of your family would be better to take care of then go to school.  I think his mother could handle it to.  Or his dad could help.  Its up for Zinkoffs decision, what will he do?

Reading Question 2

I think I would have done something different when a tall boy came and got his hat.  He just looked at the boy.  He did not argue over it.  Also when the kids started to laugh at him he did not do anything about it.  I thought he could act a bit more aggressive when someone does that.  Not stand there like if the other person was a god that everything the other says comes out like a prayer book.

Reading question 1

Zinkoff does not care what other people say about him.  Everyone laughs at him but he does not care.  He is a very kind person from the inside from the outside he is a disaster.  Example: doing huge mess .  He has a big heart likes everyone but other people think he is awful.  Zinkoff thinks he is distracted easily,  also laughs in the wrong time.