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Wednesday, October 30, 2013
Bud not Buddy 5.
I started my life in a foster home in a serious time, The Great Depression. Were many people lost there jobs and cant find any, cant find food, cant afford buying clothing etc. It is all negative stuff. Bud has a totally bad life no clothes (very little) doesn't know who is his dad Todd is bullying him Ms. Amos is treating Bud like if he wasn't there and Todd like a cute bot kind, respectful and much more. Bud has gone in a shed were cockroaches enter his ear there were wolf head and many more disasters and in a dark place. Uh! At least I'm not were Bud was!
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Lucas, I really like that you said your post in first person,but in the last sentence you said in third person. It wasn't Bud that got a Cockroach at his ear it was a person at the Home. His name is BUG. you should add some commas inside their, it is a run on sentence. Lucas, I can see you improved, GREAT JOB
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